Big Bang post 3

[dzioo]

another, and not final post for my this year's story at fmabigbang, [Arcanum Paterfamilias]
PLEASE, LEAVE THE AUTHORS SOME FEEDBACK!! their story is really awesome and it pains me that they get almost no comments! I know it's technically about a secondary character and there are a lot of OCs and difficult and unfamiliar vocabulary but please! give it a try!




"Shit!" Edward curled up and the panther coiled, leaping at the horse. Akilah danced aside, swinging his barrel around the central tent pole, then reared with the squeal of an enraged stallion. The horse plunged down with both front hooves as Edward rolled under the loose edge of the tent. The panther screamed, and Edward knew the blow had struck home.

it's a fanfiction in an FMA universe. and I'd be seriously ill if I didn't put Ed in at least one illustration.
a night picture taking place during an assault. the background was rather difficult to draw, because there are big contrasts between light in the tent and night around it, but also very small contrasts between the sky and faraway land. also, this was the first picture in which I truly used digital lineart, and used it to emphasis light from different sources. I hope it works.

Comments

[ishte.livejournal.com]

Oh this is definitely on my read list. When will the posting be complete? I want to put it on my kindle in one piece so it can go in the bathtub with me. When I have it compiled into a Kindle file, would you like me to send it to you so you can share it that way too? If not, I'll just keep it for personal use.

[fractured-chaos.livejournal.com]

It's hard to say when it'll get completed. It's kind of hitting the big-middle of the story, and we're not sure how many chapters we'll actually need to complete it. mfelizandy and I have a nasty habit of writing by the seat of our pants. We know where we want to go, and how we want to end the story... but the journey is, more often than not, along the scenic route.

I suppose it would take less time if we didn't find different ways to tie the plot up into a Gordian Knot. XD

[dzioo.livejournal.com]

glad to hear it! hmmm posting of the chapters? no idea^^; the girls seem to want to expand this story to something huge, so I'm not sure how many more chapters it'll have><

I don't mind you sharing the file, just.... what IS a Kindle file? O_o

[ishte.livejournal.com]

It's a file that can be read on the Amazon Kindle.