Big Bang post 3

[dzioo]

another, and not final post for my this year's story at fmabigbang, [Arcanum Paterfamilias]
PLEASE, LEAVE THE AUTHORS SOME FEEDBACK!! their story is really awesome and it pains me that they get almost no comments! I know it's technically about a secondary character and there are a lot of OCs and difficult and unfamiliar vocabulary but please! give it a try!




"Shit!" Edward curled up and the panther coiled, leaping at the horse. Akilah danced aside, swinging his barrel around the central tent pole, then reared with the squeal of an enraged stallion. The horse plunged down with both front hooves as Edward rolled under the loose edge of the tent. The panther screamed, and Edward knew the blow had struck home.

it's a fanfiction in an FMA universe. and I'd be seriously ill if I didn't put Ed in at least one illustration.
a night picture taking place during an assault. the background was rather difficult to draw, because there are big contrasts between light in the tent and night around it, but also very small contrasts between the sky and faraway land. also, this was the first picture in which I truly used digital lineart, and used it to emphasis light from different sources. I hope it works.

Comments

[dzioo.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you are, thank you very much!
I understand your fear of copying ideas from various places. writing isn't my forte, so I won't be voicing any opinions whether your method is right or not. I just hoped that more people would read it, because the story does deserve attention.

wow, you're flattering me way too much! because I surely don't see myself as anyone special in the fandom, there are so many amazing artists out there, especially from Japan, that I wouldn't dare comparing myself to>< but still thank you very much!

I do actually^^; although if I accepted one right now, I wouldn't be able to start on it for 2 weeks>< but on my DA journal you will find links to all info regarding this

[ladynorbert.livejournal.com]

Fabulous. I found your dA account (I just sent you a llama, actually) and read the commission information. I don't mind waiting a few weeks to arrange the commission; I'll be in a better position financially then anyway. Thanks so much!

[dzioo.livejournal.com]

yay, I sent you a llama too <3 hehehe it's always fun finding that people you know from LJ also have DA accounts^^;

I should be done with my current work this weekend so, if you want, I'd gladly take your commission^^