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Big Bang post 1

for this year's [livejournal.com profile] fmabigbang challenge, I had an honor of working with [livejournal.com profile] mfelizandy and [livejournal.com profile] fractured_chaos and their story "Arcanum Parterfamilias". it's an epic tale taking place quite a few years after manga's ending, has some elements originating from first anime, therefore it should be treated more like an AU, than actual following of any series. it mostly takes place in a certain forgotten city and deals with past that was long forgotten. canon characters appear, as well as lots of lovely and amazing OCs. the story is still in progress (20 chapters!) and that's why, I'll be posting illustrations when certain chapters are posted (yes, I did more than one drawing this year as well...). please read this amazing tale!
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The senior yevarshedaht swept into motion, their sticks blurring and sashes flying as they leapt and thrust, swept and spun. The boys on the walls cheered and gasped as Makhu escaped a broken jaw with a back handspring that rotated in midair and brought him back to his feet with his stick moving to catch Mishyael under one arm and flip him forward. Mishyael gave to the pressure, rolled over his shoulder, then stayed crouched close to the stone floor of the courtyard and twisted Makhu’s feet out from under him. Abrahn watched with a calm, weighing gaze as the two men wrestled.

motion and action scenes are not my forte. but I have to learn ad do those sometime, right?^^; watch me fail for the time being

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concept sketches I did before getting to work on final illustrations. I had to get a hang of the characters first, try putting authors' words into my lines. it was a great fun and pleasure, and I hope I did justice to all of them. I added names next to all drawings, because most of those characters will appear later in the story, but I want you to be able to see how I imagined them. also, please note that I rarely draw animals so...^^;

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this final sketch is a little surprise for my authors, because there are some characters and some scenes that deserve being drawn but didn't make it yet to polished illustrations^^; so yes, I did draw Asher for the very first time without your supervision and he may look off, but please forgive me^^; and is it wrong that I'm starting to ship him with Naomi? I dunno, twins seem to agree with me^^; Ed and Al are from... a certain scene I can't help but laugh at^^; Marissa and Theo are being cute just because


so there! go and read all amazing entries at [livejournal.com profile] fmabigbang!

[identity profile] fractured-chaos.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! I totally LOL'd out loud at Makhu and the puppy! You gave him such a wonderful "Don't f*ck with me" face! Now my roomies are convinced I'm insane (Dunno why it took so long for them to figure that out). And I absolutely adore Asher! Beautiful job.

And I don't know where you get the idea that you can't do action well. All of the action shots look amazing to me!

Thank you so very much for illustrating the story. We are so fortunate to have such a wonderful artist working with us. It has been such a pleasure.

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 08:57 am (UTC)(link)
hahaha I'm glad you did XDD it was supposed to be made for laughs^^ for some reason, I find Makhu incredibly silly who, if he's not in danger, cannot really scare anyone^^; that's why he's so appealing to me^^
phew, thank you! designing the boy was a little difficult, because he also has some mix of Aerugan genes in him, but not to such extend as his father. so yeah, some feature would stay, but some would have to be minimised^^; a tricky character, but I like him, very very much as well!

well, I don't do them as often, so they may look wierd^^; but hey, that's called practice right?^^; thank you for complimenting me!

and it's been a pleasure working with you too! I can't wait to read next installments of your work^^

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 02:10 pm (UTC)(link)
These are sooooo great! I really enjoyed seeing these and can't wait for more.

I love your action scene - it works for me!

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 08:59 am (UTC)(link)
thank you! I was surprised when I saw you were the beta for this story^^ made me even more nervous drawing for it^^;

awww, thank you! and I need to finish your big bang story. am at chapter 8 so far XD

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:22 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know why seeing my name attached to something would make you nervous! (Should I take that as a compliment?)

And I hope you enjoy my Big Bang. Yay for being at chapter 8!

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:58 am (UTC)(link)
because you're one of my favourite authors and because you used to draw as well, it makes me a little uneasy^^; it's a complicated feeling. but yes, you should deffinitely consider it as flattering! I feel that way because I respect you^^

I do, very much! when I finish, I'll give you a juicy comment >D

[identity profile] evil-little-dog.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, but I haven't drawn for realies in years and years and...er, decades. (Though if I keep collecting art supplies, I'm going to have to!) But thank you so much, I will feel very complimented and flattered.

And I do hope you enjoy the story!
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[personal profile] yuukihikari 2011-04-17 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
wow these are all so nice. I love your sketches, they're so expressive <3 and OMG your full colourpiece is gorgeous!! Its so bright, has so much colour and subtle details. It's different from how I normally see you do your clours, much more of an animation palate. Your backgrounds are always so nice and detailed T.T the detials with the hair braids/weave is so nicely done, i love what you did with it and they red beads at the ends. The motion scene is great and the motion blur in the arm makes it better. Love love love <3

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 09:22 am (UTC)(link)
thank you very much! lately it seems like my sketches are more appreciated than my finished pieces XDDD not that I mind, really^^;

about my color piece, some time ago a friend told me, that I usually make my colors grey. like, I use normal color for base but add grey tones for shadows. so I tried to make this one a little differently. and believe me, even when I compared backgrounds only, it is true that my previous works were grey O_o so yeah, if it's surprise for me, it's no wonder that you're surprised too^^; I'm glad it works for you though, thanks alot!

[identity profile] ishte.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Gha! These are beautiful. I'm pleased to see the Scarred man from Ishbal has taken a name again. Now I'll have to load that story onto my kindle (along with several others) to see how that came about. I love his long hair. Ed and Al are lovely. Love Ed's wedding ring detail. ^_^ I'll have to read to learn what this scene is about. And here I was trying to limit my big bang reading hahah... Now you just sold me on another to read.

[identity profile] whips-n-dozers.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 07:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Right now, we have the prologue and chapter one up. Other chapters are "done", they just need editing and polish. As for how Scar regained his name?


.... Well, that'll come out later XD

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 09:24 am (UTC)(link)
thank you very much! I was surprised as well, and it took me a while to start calling him by his name and not Scar^^;

I'm a sucker for wedding bands, especially on the Elrics^^;
hahahaha, sorry?^^; but you won't regret it^^

[identity profile] duokai.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
"watch me fail for the time being"
I'm sorry to have to disagree with you, but I think you fail at failing. Badly ^^

*sighs* Now I just have to read that apparently amazing story someday... ^^;

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 09:29 am (UTC)(link)
well..... but I did fail in the end^^; and you're just not onjective anyway XD

someday, when it's finished^^; I'd give you chapters I have access too, but sadly I'm not authorised >>

[identity profile] whips-n-dozers.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
By the way:

and is it wrong that I'm starting to ship him with Naomi?

Nope. Not wrong at all! ^^;;

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 09:31 am (UTC)(link)
heeeeeeeeeeee XDDDDD they totally work with eachother! can't wait to see them getting to realize what's going on^^

[identity profile] mintysage.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 07:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I LOVE your FMA art (from what I've seen on DA), and this is no exception. I've always enjoyed your character expressions, the designs, the style, EVERYTHING! Loving the action going on in the first picture, and of course the Elric kids are adorable. Definitely going to take a peek at this story!

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 10:44 am (UTC)(link)
you really are too nice for me, thank you very much ;_; I'm happy you enjoyed the pictures, hope you can enjoy the story as well! it's really worth it^^

[identity profile] qashqai1.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Ale ten Makhu wygląda zajebiście (w ogóle tyle zajebistych postaci na tych szkicach)! XD a z tym pieskiem to miszcz xD zaś kolorowy art to wręcz ocieka zajebistością, dobry efekt z tą poruszającą się ręką, i w ogóle świetny cell-shading, nie mówiąc już o postaciach i tle. XD
I słoniki! \o/
I słodkie dzieciaki na ostatnim :D nie mogę się na nie napatrzeć. :D

Btw czek ałt maj latest post. jeden link maj bi to jer lajking xD

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
Makhu jest swietny, super fajnie sie go rysowalo^^ generalnie bardzo lubie projektowac ludzion rozne dziwne postacie^^; kiedys slyszalam, ze fajnie mi wychodza starcy, co jest dla mnie dziwne O_o
awwww, kochana jestes <33 ciesze sie ze sie podobaja^^ slodkie dzieciaczki sa slodkie, bardzo jestem zadowolona jak wyszly^^

your post is very much to my liking :DDDDD dziekuje bardzoooo <33333

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
your art is so amazingly beautiful. I loved these

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
you're way too nice, thank you very much!

[identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
I was hoping to see you in this project since I love your art

Yay Asher!

[identity profile] mfelizandy.livejournal.com 2011-04-17 09:09 pm (UTC)(link)
If this is your idea of failing, you need to practice failure some more, you don't seem to have the hang of it yet. I'm sitting here grinning and restraining the urge to bounce around squealing. Asher! And Marissa! I'm going to melt into a happy puddle!

I love how you drew the Elrics "all grown up". Ed did finally make up for lost growth! He's still a trouble magnet, though. His kids are so cute, and Marissa is darling in her little-girl dress with the ruffles around her waist and her cute little sandals! Her brother's expression is just priceless.

The juxtaposition of Makhu's ferocious expression with his puppy's "Come play with me!" smile is hysterical. No matter how Makhu tries, he's just not going to look bad@$$ with a happy little puppy spoiling the effect. HEEE!!

Now for Naomi and Asher--EEEEEEEEE!!! I think I said it once before, but it bears repeating--you've drawn Naomi as recognizably her in-between age, and I haven't seen that too often. Now you've done the same thing with Asher. He's clearly not a child, and just as clearly not an adult yet either. I love how you've dressed him, with his shirt wrapped loosely (I love how you draw the drape and swing of fabric, too, there's a sense of its weight as well as freedom of motion) and the tail of his belt off to his side. His hair is perfect, the little braid makes me grin every time I look at it! His expression really catches his personality well.

OK, yeah, I have a soft spot for Asher. No, you're not wrong to 'ship him with Naomi. Just don't tell them about it yet, they're still tiptoeing around the idea!

Naomi's freckles are perfect.

Re: Yay Asher!

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 12:14 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL^^; well, I still need to practice something^^; but thank you very much!
hahah couldn't help it^^ I wanted to surprise you with Asher. and I guess that if I drew Theo once, Marissa deserves a sketch as well. even if I don't know her that much, other than she knows that her mother likes to scream at her dad^^;

Makhu is very much trying to look dangerous xDD puppy is ruining the effect XDD I don't know, you created a character that very much works for me, he's hilarious XD

you know, you're really flattering me with all those compliments^^ especially that lately I feel like it's impossible for me to draw teenagers^^; I'm glad my designs met your expectations^^ the braid was too tempting XDDD I knew that he'd resemble his dad in a way, but wouldn't want to be a copycat^^ still, single braids are fun little details^^

hahaha then I'll have to shush the twins XDD but yay^^ they'd make a really cute couple^^

freckles are my own idea^^; figured that she may inherit some after her mom. but I didn't dare to ask you about them^^; once again, thanks alot for all the kind words^^

[identity profile] dreamer1789.livejournal.com 2011-04-18 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Stunningly gorgeous artwork! *.* It really has the works: neat, expressive and live emotion. ♥

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:31 am (UTC)(link)
glad to hear it^^ thank you very much for complimenting^^

[identity profile] the-gakushi.livejournal.com 2011-04-18 11:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Woow you've really been busy!! And it was really worth to wait!! I looooove the finished piece, it's really bright and guess what? It shows a lot of movement that you've been practicing right? ^^ and then a sketch overdose *drolls* I just keep falling in love your sketches! And with some many different characters! I can't wait to read the whole thing!

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-19 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
I was^^; this year, as last year, I made more than one picture for my story^^; I really shouldn't be doing that, seems like this year every artist did plenty of drawings for their stories, and I feel bad because I'm probably to blame for it><

it shows? yay^^ looks like my training wasn't in vain^^
hahaha yeah, there are some sketches^^; glad to know someone is happy because of it^^ and yes, read it! it's really something!

[identity profile] the-gakushi.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 01:02 am (UTC)(link)
The more artwork there is the better!! I'm glad that you're spreading a new tradition xDD
No it wasn't, it's really starting to show! It was the first thing that I noticed when I first saw the artwork but I have a feeling you're holding back what you're really capable of, which is perfectly natural when trying out new things, right?
Sketches are always goooood xD If only I could sketch the same way but then again, I don't practice at all xD

[identity profile] anat-astarte.livejournal.com 2011-04-20 12:28 am (UTC)(link)
*_* Wow this is beautiful artwork!!

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-28 11:29 am (UTC)(link)
thank you very much!

[identity profile] mokka-kahvi.livejournal.com 2011-04-24 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoa. Lots of gorgeous work here. Your facial expression and poses are especially good! *admiring them, fff*

The sketches are great, but the coloured picture up there is something awesome. *admires that too*

[identity profile] dzioo.livejournal.com 2011-04-28 11:30 am (UTC)(link)
awww, thank you so much! you're praising me way too much^^ I'm happy you enjoyed the pictures, both colored and sketches^^

[identity profile] cairaguas.livejournal.com 2011-04-30 06:09 am (UTC)(link)
This art is great. I especially love everyone's expressions and the detail in the clothing. It reminds me of Arakawa's artbook. The character design style is different, but she used to draw action sketches like these. I really like them.

[identity profile] lalikaa.livejournal.com 2011-05-04 04:53 am (UTC)(link)
DEAR LORD WOMEN. All this lovely artwork gave me goosebumps! You are truly a talented artist! You are simply amazing at drawing expressions and poses, and the colored illustration at the top is particularily awesome. I am in awe.
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[identity profile] astridv.livejournal.com 2011-07-15 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I've been searching for these illustrations! I'm so happy found these posts again! Your artwork is brilliant... the colors, the poses, the atmosphere, everything's so vivid. (I haven't read any of this year's BB yet but your artwork's made me very curious about this fic.)